#1
Pretty obvious meaning, this is about depression

V1
Surrounded by friends
but lost in space.
Flashing the latest trend
Clothes stuck to lace

V2
Why does no one care for me
Why is no tear shed for me
Am i a ghost, or a breath of smoke
Am smoke, smoke on the water

CH
Screaming for attention
My heart is dry and hoarse
All i want is a mention
Or catch somebodies eye

BR
Living for the moment
we care just for ourself
Everybody needs love
I'm the odd one out.

V1

CH
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i say both. you always have the option to not use the pedal at all but it will still be there like that obsessed chick you took to homecoming and never called again, sitting there waiting for your call. so yea both
#2
Obvious meaning as you said, but I like the way you managed to fit it all together, it was simple enough to be interesting, yet complex enough to be compelling. I don't think the chorus works very well and I think that the bridge would make a better chorus, it's catchier and flow better. I don't like the "Smoke In The Water" part, it seemed sort of cheesy and dumb rather than effective. Oh well I guess you win some you lose some, 7/10. Crit mine? The links in me sig.
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#3
It surprised me that it wasnt emo at all. I kinda liked it, but at the same time felt like there was something missing.. Just seemed shallow.
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#4
yea dude, take out the smoke on the water thing
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
#5
screaming for attention, my hearts dry n hoarse is an awesome line. I also agree "smoke on the water" line needs to go. In all a pretty good song.