Hey guys, I just wrote this fairly simple song the other day and I though I may as well post it here and get some opinions. Any crits would be much appreciated and will all be returned if you have something I can crit back thanks a lot!

PS: I'm sorry but I only have a copy of the song on MySpace at the mo.

http://www.myspace.com/s1lentscream2006 - it's called Cassiopeia if you're wondering...
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