#1
lost in the ocean
floating by the people who
have dedicated theyre lives to Him
on a boat i remain
too afraid to play the game
this boat is where i am still sane

these people come and they go
where theyre going, well i wouldnt know
this floating around is giving me nothing
i need a savior, i need somthing

I saw one day, through the beams of sunray
my boat was no longer adrift
it was sinking up, high to the sky
where He took away my lost life of a lie

these people come and they go
where theyre going, well i know
this paradise is giving me something
now i need nothing.
#2
nice song, needs a hook/bridge to sum it all up but I like it.
can you crit "Strongest Man Alive" 4 me