The guitars are to fast at the begining, slow them down a little bit, the singer is good, but he's off by liek a second at each entrance, other then that the guitar, drums, and bass are all pretty good.

PS: Singer, put more emotion in your singing.
Quote by reaper_x
kudos to you, sir.

i've never heard that song before so i can't say if its too fast...
vocals were weird though. sounded pretty much bored, if you know what i mean.
meh, dont like it...it just didnt flow together, vocals are way too mono tone....drums dont seem right....