The timing of the song towards the end of each part runs because i haven't decided what to do with them.I intended to heavily edit ;add in some voice effects or instrumental riff or instrumentals but before doing anything i would like opinions and comments on ideas. Also, for the verse 1 and 2,are they position well or should verse 2 be verse 1 and the other way around. Why?

What do u think of this song? Should transpose this song to a higher key?

A Lil' Closer

The guitar is too loud, but it's a cool guitar part.
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