#1
Recently found everytime i've been writing its been more "poem Styled" so i've had a crack at the old rock song. For some reason i had buckcherry in my head, which probably wasnt the best but yeah lol. Constructive crit would be helpful. Cheers.


Sitting on a Train,
You?re hiding in my Brain,
Till I find you, and I?m going to explode.
Knocking on your door,
I?m Loud and wanting more,
You wake up, and you?re going to implode.

Because were so good together,
Spend All Night together,
Babe, I?ll always be around,
You?re my special Lover,
There ain?t goner be no other,
I?m never evvvver leaving town.

Walking in the park,
Having a Picnic in the dark,
And I wonder, maybe I should propose,
Wines going to my head,
I?m feeling all you said,
As we start, to remove our clothes,

Because were so good together,
Spend All Night together,
Babe, I?ll always be around,
You?re my special Lover,
There ain?t goner be no other,
I?m never evvvver leaving town.

Staring in the mirror,
Getting my self together,
And I know, that tonight?s the night,
Full Moon Stars out,
Everything you dreamt about,
As I leave, away from the light,

Because were so good together,
Spend All Night together,
Babe, I?ll always be around,
You?re my special Lover,
There ain?t goner be no other,
I?m never evvvver leaving town.


Surprise you at your house,
You?re entertaining someone else,
And I realise, my eyes are broken,
Knocking on your door,
Loud screaming you?re a *****,
I break down, as your lies are spoken,

Because were so bad together,
Got no more future together,
Babe, you can keep sleeping around,
You?re my mistaken lover,
Glad I?ll find some other,
I just can?t wait to get out of town.


A dream dies with a diamond,
A dream dies with a diamond,
A dream dies with a diamond,
A dream dies with a diamond,
A dream it dies, with a die a mond.
#4
too much "Oh bebe I lov oo allllllot"

know what i mean?
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