#1
This is going to be the first song in a concept album I'm working on, tell me what you think.

In time I?ll leave my imprint on this hospitals fourth wall
A single bloody imprint amongst the many on God?s fourth wall
Inside these walls I say parting to my own stability
With each lost life I beg it not to go

Break down these four walls

In time I?ll leave my bloody imprint on God?s fourth wall
But this is not the only way

Reach through the sky to the absolute

Ascertain, discern, unearth, understand

In time what I thought will be painted on the wall
My imprint to be on the outside of this enclosure
This enclosure, God?s fourth wall.
#2
i think its a good start for a concept albom but i think it should be a little longer

nothing to complain about, just curious, what type of music is it goin to ?

and if u could crit my song "climb the stairs and then watch yourself fall" thanks bro
#3
Quote by pollins1989
i think its a good start for a concept albom but i think it should be a little longer

nothing to complain about, just curious, what type of music is it goin to ?

and if u could crit my song "climb the stairs and then watch yourself fall" thanks bro


It'll be kind of a mix of Opeth, some death metal, some lamb of god.

I don't stick to one genre, the music is kinda dark though all tuned down and stuff.