You technique is sound no problems playing this song what so over, however you need to find a correct tab, there is palm muting in the chorus on the 0's and then it goes from 5 to 4 before palm muting again on 2, and i dont think there is any need to put a slide in as often as you do. Apart from that awesome stuff 9/10 for technique nice work.
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