I liked it, i think you've a very personal version of this song.
Anyways, I think that the guitar should sound a bit more clearly, because there are moments that it sounds like if you were doing a bad chord, specially when you change chords, but it's just a sensation I have, maybe you wanted to make this effect.

About you're voice, i think you should try to sing more "free", let all you have inside go out, sing all loudy you want when you feel you need. There are moments i see you should maybe sing louder. But it's the same like with guitar, i don't know if you want to do it because you like it.

Well, in general i liked it, but try to not sing so "shy", sing louder when you think it's necesary, let it go out!

It would be nice if you could have a check and crit mine.

Thanks, and good job, keep practising!
Recording quality was bad.

With your singing:
You need to work on staying in tune.
And don't sing "I'm a creeeeep" like you did, unless you ARE Bob Dylan.
Where did you record this? It seems like you were holding back a bit.
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