#1
Well heres my first attempt at writing a full set of lyrics, the guitar and singing style is kinda folky. Dont be too mean

verse
see her fall and take the wind away
it be too much to ask that i could stay
shes wonders down a road to be alone
to make herself to worthless to be shown

chorus
it took too long for her to understand
what it is to be a normal man
i'd want to say that she didnt realise
that not everything that they said were lies

verse
she gazed across and rest her head on mine
both unsure of when to draw the line
and at the moment the truth it rears its head
as we wave goodbye for someone else instead


Then its the chorus again with an outro with some 'ohhhh ohhs'

Cheers
#2
see her fall and take the wind away
it be too much to ask that i could stay
shes wonders down a road to be alone
to make herself to worthless to be shown
this is soo rough . u need to go through and smooth it out . ill help you out tho so here. the second line should be more like . Itd be too much if you asked me to stay . 3rd- She wanders down this road just to be alone. i think u should completely change the 4th line.

it took too long for her to understand
what it is to be a normal man
i'd want to say that she didnt realise
that not everything that they said were lies
1st- It took too long to make her understand 2nd - leave it go. 3rd- And somehow she never realized 4th- same

she gazed across and rest her head on mine
both unsure of when to draw the line
and at the moment the truth it rears its head
as we wave goodbye for someone else instead
Rhyming seems too forced . redo this whole verse . this can be an alright song just take my suggestions and fix it up . and if u could crit my song "Climb the stairs and then watch yourself fall". thanks bro