Although basic, our band is just starting so I'll take any advice...

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Last edited by 6_6_6_1_syn at Sep 23, 2006,
i like it, but its kind of repetitive, especially the breakdown... the same thing repeteaded 8 times gets kind of boring, also IMO the verse bass line, the third set of 8s doesnt sound quite right, i would put the bass note instead repeating the bass line intro. i like the intro and verse melody, good job
Its pretty good. I agree wuth rodrigomierh though. Good job, mate.

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I liked it, it was catchy.. But all the repeating made it blend into the background, and I forgot it was playing until I noticed there was no more music playing... It ended really abruptly too...