ok, i only have the guitar and drums at the moment so it is still a work in progress, but the guitar/drums are completely finished so i might as well post it. Take it easy on me considering i'm 14 and this is my first song I've written.
Last edited by GuitarFreak211 at Sep 23, 2006,
cool, but much too repetitive
Quote by Rockford_rocks
Who the hell is Mcjagger?

Oh my god, do you mean Mick Jagger?

Well, for ur first try its not bad. There's many improvements u could make to it.
A bit too repetitive for my liking, but keep at it. you're on ur way.

Crit mine?
oi can you post it in a different format?
i'd be really interested to hear this as i've been making my first songs ever as a 14 year old too.
and i have no idea what gp5 is, or any desire to download it