#1
Hey guys, here is a poem I wrote. I hope you enjoy it, crit for crit.


Cigarette

The smell of the cigerette
Dances around the room
It kisses our tounges with the
Dilluted aroma of
The smoke's own dance
And it's looking for a partner to waltz with
But fortunatley I am taken
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I got kicked out of a Mac store when me and my friends simultaneously put on meatspin on all of the computers in the store. Some eleven or twelve year old looking girls there freaked out.
Last edited by guitar_freak333 at Sep 24, 2006,
#2
i liked it, short and deep, but dude one thing, it's CIGARETTE, not cigetrette :P
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#3
Haha, sorry, thanks.
Quote by Qazxs
I got kicked out of a Mac store when me and my friends simultaneously put on meatspin on all of the computers in the store. Some eleven or twelve year old looking girls there freaked out.