#1
Hey Guys, here is aanother poem I wrote, I hope you enjoy it. Crit for crit

Pretty Girl

There's a pretty girl looking at me
But I know she can't see My eyes
staring, glaring at her beauty
Little do I know she's looking through me
Beyond me, or beside me
She says she's unwanted and ugly
I and only I can see the true beauty
On the inside of her figure, what she really is
What makes her shine
I stare, my brown eyes gazing into hers
Until suddenly
She looks away
Quote by Qazxs
I got kicked out of a Mac store when me and my friends simultaneously put on meatspin on all of the computers in the store. Some eleven or twelve year old looking girls there freaked out.
Last edited by guitar_freak333 at Sep 24, 2006,
#3
Edited it. I like it better thsi way.
Quote by Qazxs
I got kicked out of a Mac store when me and my friends simultaneously put on meatspin on all of the computers in the store. Some eleven or twelve year old looking girls there freaked out.