#1
well i began writting this recently but i'm not sure if it's good this is the first verse and the chorus any suggestions are apreciated and an idea for the title too XD

Verse

You, you want to be perfect
and i, i can do nothing
you're there, lost in a mirror
aware of nothing but that

Chorus
Why don't you come along with me?
i just want to make you see
all the beauty that you have
why don't you close your eyes right now?
Just to let you see what's real
break your mirror, tear it down
you don't need it anymore

thanks