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This is one of the first songs that I've actually taken time into writing lyrics for, and so far, I'm quite happy with how it's going. However, I don't really like the section after the chorus, and I'm sure that there are some other improvements that could be made too. So, I'm looking for any comments/sugestions that i can get.

I'm also looking to fit a solo in there too (after the chorus). So, if there's any suggestions for that (mainly for a decent backing to do a solo over), it would be great.
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Okay, sorry I didn't get this posted earlier, I had to work on my school project..... I liked it, but the rhythm got boring after a while, might try to find a way to change it up some... And I tried to make a rhythm for a solo really quick, so I'm gonna post it. Hope I helped. =)

If you have time, I'd appreciate your thoughts on my song, http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=438796 .
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