#1
Hey! Well, I'm trying to write a song, but I am TOTALLY a country hick and I need to know if this sounds like an okay country song. It's only the chorus so far, which is why I need someone to help me finish it

CHORUS:
Just let me take your hand
Just let me hold you tight
Cause, baby, there's no way
I'll make it through tonight
Without you here with me
I have no room to breathe
And I just can't go on
Without you loving me

So don't break away...

Please tell me what you think and help me out! lol
#2
Please delete this and repost with the title of your song as the thred title, or "untitled" if it has no title, the mods'll close this otherwise.

Thanks.
#4
how do i delete the post? lol and thanks a million for tellin me btw! lol i dont wanna get in trouble