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Bright Eyes got me thinking... i know i shouldn't but it did hate me for it after you've read the piece... peace out...

Dream (In Reverie)


I once dreamed I was the father of an 8-month-old child
His breathe caught in his chest before he had cried, that night
And I wept in those few seconds, more than I ever have before
As my tears washed down his face, and fell onto the floor

My wife woke up from her last peaceful sleep
As gasps escaped my lips, and fell about my feet
If I say his name repeatedly, he might come back to me
Or I could let his lifeless body slip and fall in reverie

?Matthew, where?s my Conor?? oh please God, wake him up
?Matthew, he?s not crying?? A sound, I need a sound?
?Matthew, it?s too quiet?, there?s nothing left to lose
She will hate herself and everything, there?s nothing I can do

She cried herself to sleep that night, and for a few years after that
With a pillow so close to her, always slightly wet
But I still hear her whisper when she thinks that I?m asleep
?Oh Conor, how I loved you? Conor, where's my prince?
The Palace now feels empty... the heir's small and weak...
Your father, held so high in mind, now falls about my feet
I can see you smiling up at me, everytime i close my eyes
Oh Conor, how i loved you... Oh Conor, why'd he lie??
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Quote by punkman_123
Damn Auals, you're messed up. :P


Quote by ZanasCross
This just reminded me of the time that my brother in law texted his mom on the night after his wedding. All it said was "Consummated."
Last edited by Auals at Oct 2, 2006,
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wow, thanks guys

ALLY it wasn't meant to make you cry though i sorta thought it would... all that talk of conor AND matthew, can't really help much... sorry

Thanks Neely, means alot to me, i don't like the "Fable" line either which i'll change soon, it was a piece that i wrote in five minutes and wanted to put up on here. Thanks heaps for your help

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Need Singing Advice?; Read the first page then ask questions.

Quote by punkman_123
Damn Auals, you're messed up. :P


Quote by ZanasCross
This just reminded me of the time that my brother in law texted his mom on the night after his wedding. All it said was "Consummated."