#1
modern life

People laugh, people die
I don't care, I won't cry
love is wrong, romance is dead
One more bullet shot through my head

"This modern life is wrong
Full of porn, full of dicks
This modern life is wrong
filled with war, filled with pricks"

You are my life, you are my air
The thought of losing you, I can not bare
This ****ing life, with all its clichés
Is kinda dumb but has always been here

"This modern life is wrong
Full of porn, full of dicks
This modern life is wrong
filled with war, filled with pricks"

This modern life...
This modern life...
This modern life...
This modern life...is wrong
Here my voice goes to ones and zeros...
#4
I don't really get the last part of the chorus: there has always been war and always been dicks. Also, I think you could re work the outro to be a bit more complex.
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#9
Duudes i like wrote this in 5 minutes, i was like way bored so i thought why not write a song and this is whate came up. It's a punky kinda song so it's alright if it sucks, it's just punk.
Here my voice goes to ones and zeros...