#1
ok people, i wrote another song (in 30 minutes) and i'd like to see your comments
please crit!!!!

Here?s to the life that
We once knew and loved
Throw it all away
?Cause we found ourselves at home
Did you remember
all the things you said?
Come here and fix me
?Cause I don?t know myself


(Chorus)
And my biggest nightmare is not a broken heart
Even if you tell me that you won?t stay tonight
I will fall for you but I won?t lose my sight

This ****ed up situation
Got me really stunned
Waiting for the moment
Until your stars are gone
Dreaming of something
That I may never have
But if she?s ok
Then I will feel alright
...."this is what's best for me, for you, for us, or maybe just for me", i thought...
#2
anyone¿?
...."this is what's best for me, for you, for us, or maybe just for me", i thought...
#4
thanx, any suggestions?
...."this is what's best for me, for you, for us, or maybe just for me", i thought...