#1
hey guys,
a new song here please crit - as always, i'll do c4c
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Sleight of Hand.zip
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#2
wow kudos.
the solo was ok, felt like i didnt go anywhere tho
the ending was def the best with the drum beat and stuff
good job
#3
That's pretty cool. I'm kind of the opposite of becker009. I liked the solo, and I thought you could do without the bass drum going crazy at the end. Other than the bass drum, I thought the stuff at the end was cool, though. Overall, nice simple yet cool song.

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#4
Pretty nifty song, upbeat and sounds cool. Does get a little repetitive after a while. just a lil bit. i really like the chorus, reminds me of a jimi hendrix type thing. i didnt really feel the solo that much, didnt hit me that hard.

pretty good job, 7/10
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#5
Nice intro, I think the slide added to it well. The main riff/chorus sounded great, had a great rythmn to it. The verse's weren't the best but I suppose with vocals they wouldn't matter as much.
Personally I loved the solo, I thought it suited the song perfectly. The bass drum was a bit annoying at the end but other than that nice work.
It was a bit short, you could probably add to it. It had a nice pace and beat to it which I really liked.

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#6
cool!, i really liked it, nice drums and bass line, the song flow its good. what i didnt like was the riffs after the intro, maybe it's for the bass to outstand, but you should change them. still grrreat job.