#1
Ok heres another from...ME..obviously check it our give it a crit. ill crit urs leave a link


Shattered Soul

Im anxiously waiting,
for you to call,
but Im also debating,
whether I should run or if I'll come crawling back,
everyone has told me,
and the time has come,
I've made up my mind,

I'm gonna pick up the pieces,
of my shattered soul,(shattered soul)
I'm gonna pick up the pieces,

Nervously I begin,
to pace the floor,
searching for an answer,
Finding myself, puzzled and, in a daze,
I..I..I..I......

Guitar Solo

I'm gonna pick up the pieces,
of my shattered soul, (shattered soul)
I'm gonna pick up the pieces,

Im alone in this house,
with just your photographs,
without hesetating,
I pick up the phone,
asking you softly,
can you, help me repair this shattered soul

there you are.....very touching to me. PLZ CRIT
My gear:
1982 Peavey Falcon
2004 Les Paul
2006 Peavey Transtube
2007 Youngblood 100w cab
2002 Dean Playmate Bass
2002 Dean Bassola
Last edited by honestlies at Nov 25, 2006,
#2
do you actually have the song, like the melody and all, planned out in your head? it would be interesting if you did
Who dat?