#1
"Pen Point The Problem"

Learn to live with what you got,
Taking pain killers to hit the spot,
You hurt all night and moan all day,
But life?s so short it just fade away,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more I need,
I know I can be sort of mean,
I?ve lost the will for in between,
I only care for what I know,
This guns loaded and ready to blow,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more time I need,
Everyday seems like the last,
I only look for things that crash,
I find more problems in my head,
This calculator it is dead,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much will I scream,
#2
very emo, and quite generic
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Quote by RockerPseudonym
I think stone is either 7 or 14 lbs

Edit I'm gonna go with 14 because it's rather unlikely you're 56 pounds


Quote by evening_crow
sounds like....u need a...

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#3
Learn to live with what you got,
Taking pain killers to hit the spot,
You hurt all night and moan all day,
But life?s so short it just fade away,

i didnt care much for this beginning... thought it was really cliche..
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,

im all for repeating a line but this is kind of overeacting... and it isnt even a strong line
How much more I need,
I know I can be sort of mean,
I?ve lost the will for in between,
I only care for what I know,
This guns loaded and ready to blow,

this sounded kind of emo tbh.. no offense
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more time I need,
Everyday seems like the last,
I only look for things that crash,
I find more problems in my head,
This calculator it is dead,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much more of me,
How much will I scream,

overal i didnt really like this song, i thought it was really cliche. I thought the basic idea of the song was a good start but you should find another way to express yourself...maybe look up some words that arent so overused. hope i helped a little...
Boo!