#1
This is a song i just wrote. I tabbed everythign except the main solo, cuz i hate tabbing out solos. I prefer improvising. I wanna record this soon, could be tommorow. So thats when ull see the solo. Its kind of an iron maiden type song, but with a different twist.
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#2
the riffs are awesome, really would like to hear the main solo...
#3
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Excellent man, I liked it a lot. It had a lot of energy that was kept through the whole song. The only problem was the harmonized bit in the interlude. I felt that it was missing something, but I'm not sure what... Maybe the rhythm guitar needs to do a small bit sofly in the background. The build up to the main solo was great, and has great potential to be a blow-away solo. Can't wait for it man!

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#4
that was cool, i liked the intro, plus the bass solo and the start of solo 2. the harmonizing just made it sound bad, maybe you should drop that part. i would be cool to see the main solo tabbed out.

overall, 7/10

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#5
Yea i went back to the US for like 2 months im back in lebanon though.

Which interlude were u talkign about that was missing somehting?
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#8
Dude, that was awesome! The riffs were so cool! I need to go check out the recorded version.

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Yea i went back to the US for like 2 months im back in lebanon though.

Which interlude were u talkign about that was missing somehting?

The harmonized one, I just feel that it needs a background riff to supplement the lead harmony. Without something like that, it sounds empty IMO. Other than that, this song rocks man! BTW, that was a very nice solo man, good job!
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