#1
It's time to put life in full throttle,
And a time to spite a good model.
Another time to hit the bottle.

I cannot see, I cannot breath,
Put my body underneath.
I want to escape,
I cannot wait.

If I go too far,
I may not return.
I have the yearn,
Yet content I will not earn.

It's time to put life in full throttle,
And a time to hit the bottle.
Satisfy the addiction,
And take the affliction.

My life is the bottle.
My life, do not model.
One more time to hit the bottle.
Last edited by teh sh33t at Oct 1, 2006,
#2
looks like something to match to a thrash metal kind of thing.
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#3
Quote by teh sh33t
It's time to put life on full throttle,
And a time to spite a good model.
Another time to hit the bottle.
I like the use of rhyming, but three lines is kind of awkward.

I cannot see, I cannot breath,
Put my body underneath.
I want to escape,
I cannot wait.
Still kind of short in my opinion.

If I go too far,
I may not return.
I have the yearn,
Yet content I will not earn.
This is my favorite verse, I'm not sure why... it just it.

It's time to put life on full throttle,
And a time to hit the bottle.
Satisfy the addiction,
And take the affliction.
I like this one too.

My life is the bottle.
My life, do not model.
One more time to hit the bottle.
Three lines, still kinda awkward... but just my opinion.

Well, in my opinion, it's alright... could be better.
I like the theme/plot of the song.
It's just kind of short, and I don't see flow....
Just remember, that's only me.
It may fit you/your band perfectly.