#1
This is a song i wrote yesterday. Its kind of iron maiden style with a different twist. The main solo is all improvised, and i did it in two takes. I was really happy with the wy the solo turned out, i think its the best improv ive ever done. Ill be happy to crit your songs if u crit mine, of course to the extent of how u critted mine.

thanks

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Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

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#3
That's cool. I liked the main solo, it went really well. The timing was off somewhere in the middle, though (oops!) I don't think the harmonizing was as bad as everyone thought it was. I liked it, I think it added a bit to the song. There's not much I can say. That's a cool piece.

Care to crit some of my stuff? Links are in my sig (PowerTabs). And if you've seen my comment over in Tabs and Chords, ignore that.
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#4
Yea there was one part in the middle where i kinda messed up the rhythm.

thanks for the crits guys!
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

Let me ask you, does a machine like yourself ever experience fear?

#5
sounds pretty good. only thing is the constant symball smashing on the drums gets kinda repetitive after a while. good stuff otherwise, though.
#6
^ are you taking about during the bass solo/interlude thing? yea i need to work on that whole thing a little bit...
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

Let me ask you, does a machine like yourself ever experience fear?

#8
screw what everyone else says that **** is bad. the solo kinda sux compared to the rest...****, i say take it out and there u go! crit mine?
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