#1
hey, new song i wrote blah blah blah


bitter twisted notions,
in a tyrannical, cynical world
going through the motions,
until our final day

chorus
we can change the way we act
we can change the way we think

but it dont make a bit of difference
cause its all gone in a blink
shot down in flames
f**k all the games ( we played)
shot down in flames
by a gun without an aim


little boys are rivals
their fighting on the lawn
10 years down the line
into a battle, a war their drawn

chorus
we can change the way we act
we can change the way we think

but it dont make a bit of difference
cause its all gone in a blink
shot down in flames
f**k all the games ( we played)
shot down in flames
by a gun without an aim

chorus
we can change the way we act
we can change the way we think

it dont make a bit of difference
cause its all gone in a blink
shot down in flames
###### all the games ( we played)
shot down in flames
by a gun without a aim

shot down
shot down
in flames
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#3
Songs of war are usually pretty deep...this is kinda shallow lyracly. the title doesnt really fit, shot down in flames is kinda more related to teasing your buddy when he gets turned down by some hottie...atleast for me anyway...blame ACDC for that I guess. I ve seen better from you, maybe thats why I was xpecting a little more ...Thanks for your crit on Fly High
Last edited by LaLaLaLoopy at Sep 30, 2006,
#5
Yeah, well, so was The Razor's Edge, but I have seen tons of different songs with that name.

Before I crit this, what genre is this gonna be??
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#6
i was thinking of a classic rock kinda sound

lalalaloopy, yeah it aint my best. It's one of those songs you think f**k thats good when you first write it...but the more you look at it you think **** that sucks

nevermind, there's always the next one
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