#2
The song has lots of potential. Obviously, it still needs to be fleshed out. The opening riff would definitely benefit from more than just doubling the parts. The second part, with the picking, is pretty cool. Although, the ending of the lead track finishes kind of awkward. Wrong note(s)? Anyway, it's an easy fix.

I hope you don't mind, but I threw a quick thing together, so you could brainstorm. It's a bit cheesy. I didn't tune up and most of the tracks were done in one take, so expect some timing issues and some bad notes.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/afallenempire1-mp3.html - Stream

http://www.zshare.net/download/afallenempire1-mp3.html - Download

However, don't think I'm telling you, this is exactly how it should be done. It's just food for thought. Plus, I don't think sudden harmony would work well for an intro (maybe a break). You could try the intro with an acoustic or blast out with distortion. I had some more ideas and a riff, but this will do. Hope it helps.

I did a little jam thing. Check it out if you want.

Here:
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=441829
Last edited by Acoustic#3 at Oct 1, 2006,
#3
Thanks, that was really helpful. I am going to re-record the intro part and do what you did with the harmony. Thanks
#4
Quote by rankine
Thanks, that was really helpful. I am going to re-record the intro part and do what you did with the harmony. Thanks


Cool. Post it when you're done and I'll listen again.