Quik Axe Player
The quickest of the quick
Join date: May 2006
1,004 IQ
#1
I just started messing around on powertab and I got the intro. Then messed around a little more and got what I have now. Crit4Crit.
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Fatt Sorum
UG's Resident Emo
Join date: Oct 2005
819 IQ
#2
firstly, the flatted fifth harmony that you use often enough in the song sounds horrible.
then again, most of it sounds horrible

no offense, but you should delete this and start again
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Nunwhxre 666
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Join date: Aug 2006
1,430 IQ
#3
See post above.
Crit mine if you wish. It's in my sig.
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TheDarkestNights
UG Addict
Join date: Oct 2005
3,034 IQ
#4
I'm sorry, but that is the Adolf Hitler of powertabs. I think my ears are bleeding.

Delete and start over.

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rodrigomierh
havok 32
Join date: Jul 2005
949 IQ
#5
lol it sounds like heil hitle rock. your song is missing a chord progression, its 1 or 2 chord played through each riff (if those are riffs!...) , and it makes it sound repetitive,BUT dont give up! start all over again and generate new fresh ideas. cheers

crit mine? its on my sig. thanks
Burning_Angel
Valar Morghulis
Join date: Jun 2006
2,379 IQ
#6
doest flow.. not even close to even metalish.

I lost interest after the first line repeated.
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Quik Axe Player
The quickest of the quick
Join date: May 2006
1,004 IQ
#8
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what has happened to you quick axe, you use to make good stuff, but your last two songs have just. . . uh, redo it, i like the idea but not the chords


I don't know whats been to me. I guess I'm better at writing songs