Fallenblood
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Join date: Oct 2006
305 IQ
#1
Here's an almost complete song by me. Would you give me some criticism on it?
Attachments:
x6.zip
Spark1284
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Join date: Feb 2004
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#2
its really all over the place, i think u tried to get too fancy with it instead of just writing for what the song needed. the main riff really isnt that good and the rhythm is a little unsettling. the piano also has to go, but i did however like the way the rhythm in the 5th and 6th bar went together. really cool. id simplify it a little more and work more on the generally riffing right now
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Fallenblood
C'mon, yell at me.
Join date: Oct 2006
305 IQ
#3
Thanks. The piano is supposed to sound like that, though.