nexteyenate
UG's Passafire Fan
Join date: Jun 2006
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#1
This is a song i made when i was bored. I screwed up on bars 12-13 and im too lazy to go back and fix that but any other comments would be appreciated. thanks!

EDIT: added a unique bass line to bars 10-11. fixed chorus.
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RedDeath9
UG's Nu/Shyguy
Join date: Aug 2006
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#3
That was alright. Kinda sounds like Black Dahlia Murder, except a little bit too happy... Anyway, the first part of the intro was kind of boring, but when it starts harmonizing it sounds pretty cool. Bars 10-11 were kinda boring, try adding some sort of bass riff there. I liked the harmonizing again right after it. The chorus was alright, nothing too special though. Try adding a fast part to the solo, and add another guitar playing rythym. With just bass it sounds kind of dull. I liked how you did the outro part though.

7.5/10.
nexteyenate
UG's Passafire Fan
Join date: Jun 2006
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#4
a fast part to the solo is almost impossible because the other guitarist in my band cant play fast at all and i cant play that fast either.
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Csquared1001
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Join date: Jul 2005
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#6
I liked the intro, had a wierd feel too it, pretty sweet. The song kinda gets repetative though so try a key change or something. Also a solo would be a great addition. Otherwise good riffage.
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