nexteyenate
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#1
This song started as an acoustic song with one guitar. I then added another acoustic guitar and then i added an electric guitar and altogether i thought it sounded fairly decent. I also tried out a bass solo and it sort of fit in there but i could take some suggestions on it. I realize that there is a weird part in the acoustic guitar solo but it doesnt sound that bad. Suggestions appreciated!
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#2
i thought this was very well done. the acoustic intro was really good. i like the little interlude at bar 9. the rythmn electric part got a little repetitive after a while but the high solo guitar part was good
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#3
As with your other song, the riffs kinda get repetative. Another thing, the intro wasn't very good, waaay too simple. fix these and your song will be better
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nexteyenate
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#4
well, I've only been playng guitar for about six months, so i don't want to make it dificult for me to play by making the intro more complicated. Also, rest assured, the riffs sound much better and somehow more varied with vocals. i realize that they are repetative, but i'll try to fix that with my next song.
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nexteyenate
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#5
I added a PTB version. The solo is kinda screwed up because i imported it from a midi file.
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#6
The intro wasn't too bad. But it did get kind of repetative. I really liked bars 48-63 (solo?) Yeah it was alright, 6.5/10. I never give out 10s though... so yeah...
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#7
I really liked the intro. I liked the solo aswell.
7/10
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#8
Apart from the final bar, which isn't good at all, i love this song, especially the acoustic guitars. 8.5/10

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nexteyenate
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#9
final bar is just supposed to be the part at the end of the song when i just scream out "Jam!" and my brother and i start playing really fast stuff. those sections are always more fun
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#10
I agree with everything said before...it was decent but there were a few repetative parts and small areas that should be fixed.

7/10
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#11
wow i really liked that it was catch the harmoneys and rythems were really good and i really liked all the acoustic parts it was upbeat and overall verywell writen the solo was nice and every noted seemed to serve a pupose

Overall very well done 9.5/10
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#12
I really liked peaceful predator. I have good songs but i dont have the patience to tab them (plus paranoia someone will steal them)
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