Poll: Who do you want to preogress to the Final?
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View poll results: Who do you want to preogress to the Final?
Green
3 18%
Red
8 47%
Purple
1 6%
Blue
5 29%
Voters: 17.
Jammydude44
Bad Santa
Join date: May 2006
8,469 IQ
#1
Let the Games Begin!! Please Vote!!

Herded are the Sheep

Hexed words strike eternal ears
A manifestation of internal fears
The shackles of time forcing us to flock
While those on the throne begin to mock



Down by MacDougal-- You flitting your eyes at me, sparks dancing out through the humid air and
Erupts into neon-bright fire flies, splashes the pavement and burns like the bridge between us
And I stand less straightly
Cause I bent myself backwards to cover this gap between you and me



The boy made of stone
with tears like diamonds
rain from the sky
and cleanse a broken youth



The Cab Rider

Down in the slums, around the burgers and their buns;
The Cab Rider; omnipresent and still.
Streaking the pavement
Merciless at will.
Alk 3 addict
James
Join date: Mar 2006
376 IQ
#5
Red was the best... but I didn't like the "and" at the end of the first line...
Quote by Cal UK
Alk hit the nail on the head there.
caz_guitar_dude
I hate my user name.
Join date: Jun 2005
648 IQ
#9
Quote by Jammydude44
^ It's four, it wouldn't fit on the screen...

Jamie

Oooh, 4 lines on MS Word?
Jammydude44
Bad Santa
Join date: May 2006
8,469 IQ
#10
Notpad I said I would judge by each one what I considered acceptable as a line, it just about made it :p

Jamie
Phoebus
S+L OG
Join date: Sep 2004
712 IQ
#12
not for nothing, i did specifically say when i sent the piece in that if "down by MacDougal" counted as a line to cut it off, because i was aware that people would bitch. so no crying.