Fallenblood
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#1
Here's the latest, uh, thing by me. It's unfinished, and I'd appreciate any ideas how to continue it as well as opinions on the quality of the song.
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y8.zip
Last edited by Fallenblood at Oct 30, 2006,
Fallenblood
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#4
Huh, my mistake. Edited.
Last edited by Fallenblood at Oct 17, 2006,
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#5
wow, catchy.

the melody riff sounded okay, i like how you don't just stay on the root notes.

however, the song seems quite short (obviously you havent finished, but an 8 bar verse at 180 bpm goes by VERY quickly).

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#6
i liked it. however im assuming you arent finished with it so hopefully you continue you it.

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Fallenblood
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#7
Added the second verse, a catchy pre-chorus, and a chorus.
Last edited by Fallenblood at Oct 22, 2006,
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#8
i liked the way you wrote it and it sounded pretty cool
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