jerm__
Registered User
Join date: Jul 2006
2,646 IQ
#2
pretty good but some riffs are repetative
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ouchies
UG's OG
Join date: Jan 2006
1,613 IQ
#3
Your best riffs are by far the chorus and the preverse at measures 46. The intro got really repetitive, and i thought that lead thing for the first verse sounded bad.


All in all i enjoyedl istening to it though. That lead thing in the first verse made me want to stop listening to it at first though.

crit mine please?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=448390
ouchies
UG's OG
Join date: Jan 2006
1,613 IQ
#5
really? my bad :]


well i changed it so its a little different now, and it has some added riffs :3, but you dont have to crit it again.


i did that to 2 people so far :], sorry
leo_p8
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2003
175 IQ
#6
I think you have some awsome ideas laid out in there... they just need a little more life breathed into them... in other words: Don't repeat as much, and if you MUST, have a varying lead for each part. If you can add drums I'd love to hear it again... it'll sound much more like death metal than it actually does!
aprescott_27
Friggatriskaidekaphobic
Join date: Nov 2004
859 IQ
#7
The biggest thing I didn't like about it is that it's too repetative.

However, I did like the chorus riff a lot. I liked most all of the riffs actually, just some were repeated too much.

Did anyone else get a droning note after the first time through the first verse? Damn, that was annoying ...

Anyway, care to crit some of my stuff? May not be your style, but I would appreciate the comments, anyway. Links are in my sig.
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