Masochist_Lust
<3 Kate <3
Join date: Oct 2006
839 IQ
#1
My first song on this site, second I wrote. All crits are good, I get frustrated with Midi and stuff, so I'll record it soon.

Deprived of Flesh

<> Natural Harmonic
() Pinch Harmonic
x  Palm Mute
h  Hammer-on
p  Pull-off
~  Vibrato

Tuning: DADGBe

Intro:
|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|
|--010010-----------321------|
|--010010------1----321-(1)--|
|--010010-02302-023-321------|
   xxxxxx           xxx

Verse One:
|--------------------------|
|--------------------------|
|------<4>------(8)~-------|
|--032---------------0000--|
|--032------35-------0000--|
|--032-----0--3------0000--|
   xxx     x         xxxx

Chorus: Guitar One
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|
|--55-88-77-33-55-88-77-33-55-88-77-33-55-88-000000--|
|--55-88-77-33-55-88-77-33-55-88-77-33-55-88-000000--|
|--55-88-77-33-55-88-77-33-55-88-77-33-55-88-000000--|
                                             xxxxxx

Guitar Two
|---------------------------------------------------------------5----|
|--88-1111-1010-66-88-1111-1313-1010-88-1111-1010-66-88-1111-578-87--|
|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
|--55-8-8--7-7--33-55-8-8--1010-7-7--55-8-8--7-7--33-55-8-8----------|
|--------------------------------------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------------------------------------|

Verse Two Intro:
|-------------------|
|-------------------|
|-------------------|
|--5-6-3-0-5-6-3-0--|
|--3-6-3-0-3-6-3-0--|
|----6-3-0---6-3-0--|

|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|
|----------------------------------------------------|
|-----666333------666333------666333------666333-----|
|--333------555333------555333------555333------555--|
|----------------------------------------------------|

Bridge One:
|---------------------|
|---------------------|
|---------------------|
|--01043-578---65-54--|
|--01043----467--7----|
|--01043--------------|

Bridge Two:
|-------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------------|
|--0-0000-1p0-0000-1p0-00-3-0000-2h3-0000-5h6-00--|
|--0-0000-1p0-0000-1p0-00-1-0000-2h3-0000-5h6-00--|
|--0-0000-1p0-0000-1p0-00---0000-2h3-0000-5h6-00--|
     xxxx     xxxx     xx   xxxx     xxxx     xx

Bridge Three:
|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|
|----------------------------|
|---------------2----3-------|
|-------------------------4--|
|--00-2-00-3-00---00---00----|
   xx   xx   xx   xx   xx

Bridge Four:
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|
|-------------------------------------------|
|--2-00-5-00-2-00-5-00-2-00-5-00-2-00-5-00--|
|--1-00-4-00-1-00-4-00-1-00-4-00-1-00-4-00--|
|----00---00---00---00---00---00---00---00--|
    xx   xx   xx   xx   xx   xx   xx   xx

Outro:
|-------------------|
|-------------------|
|--------------2----|
|--54----0---23-3---|
|--54----0-23----2--|
|--54-00-0----------|
      xx   xxxx xx

Intro x4
Verse x8
Chorus x2
Verse Two Intro x4
Verse x8
Chorus x2
Bridge One x8
Bridge Two x4
Bridge One x8
Bridge Two x8
Bridge Three x8
Bridge Four x2
Verse x8
Chorus x4
Bridge Three x8
Outro x8
whalepudding
UG Lovely Member
Join date: Aug 2005
954 IQ
#2
It looks really good, but I have no idea what rhythm it is, so yeah.
I'LL PUNCH A DONKEY IN THE STREETS OF GALWAY
Masochist_Lust
<3 Kate <3
Join date: Oct 2006
839 IQ
#3
Fair enough. Basically, the intro is all the same speed.
Before each harmonic in the verse, there is a slight pause. The palm mutes are a bit faster that the rest of it aswell.
The chorus is like a folk metal melody, like, long, short long, short long etc... except for the palm muting.
The intro to verse two is tremelo for the single notes, and very chunky powerchords for the other part.
All of the bridge is pretty much the same, except for bridge two, where the not palm-muted powerchords are a bit longer.
The outro is pretty much the same length.

Thanks.