apc--ibanez
UG Member
Join date: Dec 2005
323 IQ
#1
Yeah basically did this the last couple of days, it sounds much better when I play it on guitar than guitar pro, in guitar pro it sounds a bit dodgy. But anyway check it out and let me know what you think, its not fully done but this is what I've done so far.

EDIT: and i will have a new version of this tomorow once I've finished with it
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metalcore-ish.zip
Last edited by apc--ibanez at Oct 31, 2006,
ouchies
UG's OG
Join date: Jan 2006
1,613 IQ
#2
I dont really like the rhythm. Its not bad at all for a first song though. Keep writing and you will keep improving.
grampastumpy
Not actually old.
Join date: Jul 2005
1,206 IQ
#3
I'm with ouchies about the rhythm. Everything else does sound about right. All in key and stuff. Like he said, good first song, but it's just not unique. I know that since it's your first song that's not gonna be a main priority but yeah. Later on you might wanna branch off and do something else. Maybe something with more than one guitar.
(https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=458398)