UG's Passafire Fan
Join date: Jun 2006
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the opening riff is very cool but would sound much better with two guitars (if you know how to use thirds. if u dont, its alright as it is). the sliding part in the chorus kinda throws off the timing of the song. make the note that you slide to a fourth note and the problem will be fixed. overall, its kinda like "metalcore by numbers" in a sense. its very much your stereotypical metalcore song, but it has its good spots. good job. keep it up.
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