Csquared1001
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Join date: Jul 2005
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#1
Alright i need your opinions on this riff. Please be honest and provide constructive critism. Also please provide a link to the riff/song you want ME to crit. Thanks UGers
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Riff #15.zip
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Leper Messiah
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#2
i really liked tht second riff i liek the feel of it. but im not really digging the first one. Although it is ok leading into the 2nd riff

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Csquared1001
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#3
yeah the first few bars are meant to be with flanger and reverb but i can't get them on GP5
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#4
Yea the second one is pretty cool, rmeinds me of somethying. bluesy rock. nice!

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#5
did like the 2nd part...often times i hear a rythym wrong and i things start to sound offbeat...thats what it seemed like, but it was most likely me because it was all in a common time
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#6
thanks for helping me with the question and i liked your riff and i hope you dont mind but i modifyed it.....only for fun but i think it works , try it

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#7
I quite like it. the second part after the slide from the 12th fret is really enjoyable. i agree with 6_6_6_1_syn that seems offbeat but that just because theres no drums. get some drums in there btw because it will sound awesome
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GuitarManiac09
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#8
Quote by Leper Messiah
i really liked tht second riff i liek the feel of it. but im not really digging the first one. Although it is ok leading into the 2nd riff

Basically what he said, the first is kinda bland, but the second riff has more stuff going on and is pretty cool.
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#9
cool dude. I liked the second one alot. Thanks for the crit.
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#10
Yeah, the second part's slides are great, the blues-rock style is very evident (but sitll has some extra flavour to it).
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#13
Pretty nice. It actually sortof reminded me of bands such as DIO and Primal Fear.


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