NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#1
Im not sure what genre this would fall under really. It has influences from Iron Maiden and other bands like possibly Children of Bodom, since it has keyboard stuff. I experimented with this song with keyboards and more active bass lines. Im quite happy with it, the intro kinda makes wonder and i think thats what hooks people into listening in more.

Your crits are appreciated, as always
Attachments:
world of our own.zip
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

Let me ask you, does a machine like yourself ever experience fear?

Sadistik
yellow strat wanker
Join date: Dec 2005
47 IQ
#2
If you got a straight up band to play it, it'd be sweet as hell
Snipy
Metalhead
Join date: Aug 2006
392 IQ
#3
Nice I love it 10/10
I agree with sadistik
GuitarManiac09
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2006
867 IQ
#4
That was absolutely amazing, I loved it. There were a few parts where there were too many instruments playing at the same time and it just sounded blended together, it was weird (such as measures 97 through 104). My advice to help that is not to have so many instruments on the same volume level, pick the few you find the most important and set them to sixteen or keep them at 15, but designate others some lower levels. I'm just about to make my thread, so tell me if you still need a linky.

Great Job

EDIT: Here it is anyways https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=7248222#post7248222
Last edited by GuitarManiac09 at Nov 5, 2006,
NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#5
THanks for the crits guys! ive got a recorded version now, its in my sig if u wanna check it out.
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

Let me ask you, does a machine like yourself ever experience fear?