altosaxgeek5
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Join date: Apr 2006
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#1
So, here it is, my first finished song.. yay for me. Constructive criticism is welcome, of course, and I promise to not get whiney and flamey if you decide to totally bash my song.
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synthtune.zip
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Spark1284
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#2
great riffs and compostition, but its the same riff overrr and overrr and overrrr, bridge? interlude? anything at all to change it up would be nice
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altosaxgeek5
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#4
^^It is repetitive, so I'll try to work in an interlude.
^ Yes, I have posted it before, but it's gone through some changes since before.
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altosaxgeek5
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#5
Here it goes with the interlude. The interlude is something I'd written that was originally unrelated to it, but I decided to add it in, so tell me what you think.
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synthtune.zip
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mattvl
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#6
Very cool little piece. Reminds me of the old classical experiments in X Major/Minor. There is alot of repetition but at the same time it is a fairly long piece. Setting out a basic structure for it might help developing the piece as a whole but as it is I still think it's a neat bit of songwriting.