grampastumpy
Not actually old.
Join date: Jul 2005
1,206 IQ
#1
Yeah, I decided to screw around with some diminished. The beginning sounds like normal metal. It speeds up and changes direction sort of and then goes all diminished style. It's nowhere near done yet. Drums suck. I believe as a whole it's on the poopy side right now.
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Random Song.zip
Last edited by grampastumpy at Nov 10, 2006,
coffeeguy9
Music is my Aeroplane
Join date: Sep 2004
985 IQ
#5
Critting as I listen.

The intro riff is a little cliche. I like the diminished triad harmonies at the end of the phrases that go up a half step overy other measure. Bring the drums into the mix, it's metal, VERY drum centric music. Syncopate up the rhythm in the drums a bit to correlate with the guitar. Especially on the power chords after the harmonic runs. Also... a bit short. Maybe if you like it enough put some time into creating an A and B section and make the song a bit longer, eh?

mine: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=463370
grampastumpy
Not actually old.
Join date: Jul 2005
1,206 IQ
#6
Updated. With a little thing after the previous ending. Not sure you guys will like it. Also a little 4-bar bridge of arpeggios before returning to the second part again.
chrisatgrace
I've got two legs
Join date: Oct 2005
2,848 IQ
#9
alright, your very fast, but the guitar sounded almost like a computor. idk. pretty sweet though
grampastumpy
Not actually old.
Join date: Jul 2005
1,206 IQ
#10
It is(a computer)...I have a better one at the bottom of the list. It's missing the third part but I changed it a little.