§tratocaster
UG's #1 Procrastinater
Join date: Aug 2005
1,738 IQ
#2
not a big fan of when the whole band plays the same thing. if you had some harmony or something it might be better but right now its pretty lame. thats what i think.

edit: now that ive torn apart your song, crit mine?
Last edited by §tratôcaster at Nov 12, 2006,
Thefallofman
Lesh Is More
Join date: Aug 2006
1,572 IQ
#3
I like the piano part of Dreamcatcher. The rest of the stuff is just so simple it's boring, especially the drums.
Sarcasmo
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2005
149 IQ
#4
I don't like the way all the instruments cut out for the bass in the verse of the maiden, it feels too abrupt. And like §tratôcaster, I think that these could be a lot better with some harmonies or melodies. You are using a lot of instruments, so have fun with them and be creative. I was glad to see you guys mixing it up towards the end of the maiden, which i thought the better of the two songs. The songs aren't bad, they're just missing something. Keep it up though.


mine
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=459518