nickeh
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2006
192 IQ
#3
I dont want to ****ing promote my song!
I just want a opinion!
coffeeguy9
Music is my Aeroplane
Join date: Sep 2004
985 IQ
#8
critting as I go along:

Initial thought... you have some awesome composition skills. Whoa... the metal entrance is perfect. Has low grungy bass end, and high end keyboards. No middle end? This is seriously some awesome work. Interesting progression too. 39 has a nice entrance of supporting parts. 47 same thing. Repeat to 23, good idea. This sounds like an arrangement i've played on... can't put the specific name on it though. 59 has good bass usage. You can't hear the brass (as a brass player, I'm a little sad ) Ritard is perfect. The part at 115 sounds like that part of a movie where your in a life or death chase, lol. 167 is a drastic change. Bass solo is ace. Bassline 187 for somereason doesn't fit for me. 195 needs bass. The guitar solo is pretty... uh... technical. omg, bass arpeggios, interesting. 219 comes in a bit too hard, try either easing it in or overdoing it, meaning, make a measure of silence or a complete 1 instrument solo. 243 and the rest of the ending seems a little short for such an epic song. And are those arpeggios even possible for a harp?

Awesome song. Definately epic. i'd love to hear it recorded with some added dynamics. Which it needs. On some of the straight chord chaning parts, add some volume dynamics. Sorry if this review sounds a bit hard, i'm trying to give constructive input on it. One of the best songs i've heard ever posted in this forum.

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=463370
nickeh
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2006
192 IQ
#9
Oh man thanks for the crits, if only could se my smile right now . I dont think you where hard all crits cant be good, but im happy to hear all.

Now im going to crit yours!