NovemberRain273
I don't like Guns n Roses
Join date: Oct 2005
5,451 IQ
#1
Heres a minute or so, most likely the intro, of a metal song i started writing today. Its called From a Soldiers Eyes. I wanna try and add a lot of variety in this song with key changes and such, and I wanna try to make it a long old school style maiden type 7 minute or so long song.
Attachments:
from a soldiers eyes.zip
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ShadowintheSun
UG's Thrash Metal Fanatic
Join date: Nov 2006
335 IQ
#2
I like the guitars but the drums don't go with it. Just change the drums and u'll have somethin good there.
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Join date: Apr 2004
1,449 IQ
#3
The drums sounded a bit too 'light' and I like the feel of the song, maybe it needs some rhythm behind that verse bit.