nexteyenate
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#1
okay, i was fooling around with the piano at my grandparents' house and got an idea for a song. I expanded upon it and added new sections. My friend said its terrible and clashes horribly and i should just give up on it. whats your opinion on it? PS the piano part is meant to be played by two people
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#2
its aight, kinda random though, like the pieces dont fit together and the tracks dont intertwine well, like the string ensemble part is crazy (not a great thing) like its a little fast for any violinst or cellist to play THAT fast
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#3
well that part was meant to be synth but i dunno, kinda sounded cool in GP.
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#4
and also, this is the layout of the song, not so much the intro. Thisis just a layout for the song. the first couple of bars will have their own section and will have more piano "riffs" that fit along with its style. then it will transition into the next section of the song. the same goes for all the other parts of the song
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Actually, I liked it...
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#6
thanks very much
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#7
I think its pretty good, but the piano chords would sound better on a guitar IMO
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nexteyenate
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#9
you're veering off now. I like it but it could do with a bit more guitar and a bit less piano. If i were u, i'd go back to the older stuff.

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