Hallows_Eve
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Join date: Oct 2006
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#1
It's a power metal/neo-classical, Angra and Yngwie Malmsteen influenced song. IMO, this is my best song-writting yet. Still working on this song, tho. Feedback?
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Last edited by Hallows_Eve at Nov 14, 2006,
Nightmare_xxx
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#2
i like it, just one thning though, try and link the different parts of it together so it isnt just the same patter moved up and down. other than that it sounds good
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Hallows_Eve
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#3
Quote by Nightmare_xxx
i like it, just one thning though, try and link the different parts of it together so it isnt just the same patter moved up and down. other than that it sounds good


*confused* You're saying add variety to the riffs so they're not as repetitive right?

Thanx for the crit, btw
Spark1284
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#5
i love the chords under the intro melody part, but the second melody just gets annoying
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Quik Axe Player
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#7
It is way worse. All it is is a bunch of noise. Sorry, it just SUCKS
Hallows_Eve
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#8
Quote by Quik Axe Player
It is way worse. All it is is a bunch of noise. Sorry, it just SUCKS


The entire song or jsut the new 2nd melody?