ElBrutus
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Join date: Nov 2006
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#1
This is one of the first songs I've written.. midi/ptb are attached. Thoughts, ideas, criticism are welcome
Nunwhxre 666
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Join date: Aug 2006
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#5
Very well written for a first song. I absolutely loved the solo. Everything was really good. Except when the rhythm first comes in the intro. That chord progression sounds so generic. I loved the bass in measures 54 - 55. Overall about 8/10. Very good job on this.

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Spark1284
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#6
too modern for me, i love the chords that come in with the intro, cool solo, bar 37 power chords are not so fun, and the bass seems to trail off every now and then, and hit some off notes, overall i liked it but i think it needs more polishing
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