hjkfkru
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Join date: May 2005
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#1
Ok so this is my bands song but i came up with it heh.
some things is just random solos and mini solos i tabbed.
crit please =).

ok thanks for the critting i have edited this a bit now.
Attachments:
check this =).zip
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Last edited by hjkfkru at Nov 23, 2006,
aprescott_27
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Join date: Nov 2004
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#2
Ok,

First: You want to put something about what kind of file you have in there. It appears to be a Guitar Pro 5 file, so you want to put GP5 somewhere in your title. It seems the mods have been slacking off about deleting threads without that sort of information in their title, but I still wouldn't trust them to just delete it. (Read the rules for more info.)

Second: I don't have Guitar Pro, so if you could post a MIDI, I will crit your song for you.
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hjkfkru
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#3
okey and how do i do a midi =)
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Captian Xero
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#5
This doesnt make much sense. I suppose it'd be cool if you were going for an Insane metal song.... But Its strange. Study on theory and learn how to use better transitions. You have some very cool stuff in here... but it doesnt sound good the way you have it bunched.
hjkfkru
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#6
captian xero could u maybe edit it a bit so i see what u mean
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PooKoo
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#8
Your solo was the most cliche thing i've ever heard, the pgoression is so impossibly overdone that i cannot even begin to voice how annoying it was to hear it again, your rhythms lack any semblence of cohesion or theory, but some oare okay in their own right, your "breakdown" was worthless, and the whole thing's only saving grace was that it reminded me so very much of megaman.

But not bad for a first song, <3
hjkfkru
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#9
bump
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