nevertoolate
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2005
32 IQ
#1
Every morning when I wake up,
I see you lying there.
Your sleepy eyes, no makeup,
your tossed and tangled hair.
I wrap my arms around you,
it feels good to hold you tight,
and I'll thank my lucky stars,
when I'm back with you tonight.

Chorus

Destiny shown down on me,
and placed you in my life.
my lady friend and lover,
a gift to me my wife.

2nd verse

I've never known such kindness,
or comfort in a touch.
one as wise or understanding,
to whom I could love so much.
still you're very much a women,
in every way I see.
there's no one else that can fuel the fire,
like the one you burn in me.

chorus

destiny shown down on me,
and placed you in my life.
you're my lady friend and lover,
a gift to me my wife.
knights_doom
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2006
21 IQ
#2
first off this has to be some country song or some metal with the vocals you cant understand. change the name of the song. the lyrics flow really nice.

i feel its one of those cheesy love songs that could work out somehow
punchupatatigge
Registered User
Join date: Jun 2006
1,896 IQ
#3
Hey man. Please hit edit post and hit delete. This is the contests thread, you should be psoting it in the S&L generic thread. Otherwise it'll just get locked and deleted for you, and I think itd be better if you kept your writing =].

Good luck